Cottonball Cloud

A Wank Wednesday Effort. To play, go here! And, yes, I know this is rubbish. This is my THIRD attempt at writing for this prompt, by the way…

Cottonball Cloud

Soft like a cottonball cloud.

Tender as the night.

A night spent in your arms

is a night without fright.

Your kisses keep me alive.

Your caresses shake me to the core.

What do I want from you?

More, more, more!

Keep me close to your heart.

Tell me what you feel.

I want to make sure

that this thing is real.

Love me like no other

Make me scream so loud

Our love, what we have

Is like the tenderest cottonball cloud

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  1. It seems it is poetry week this week, must be something to do with the word cloud but I like it, specially this one, the last line in particular is brilliant.


  2. Lisa

     /  July 20, 2011

    Beautiful – it’s like you are describing my man & me!!

  3. Sweet sentiments indeed – gorgeous – and there I was, thinking, “oh dear, looks like rain is coming” :). I will view clouds with a little more passion from now on 🙂

  4. Lovely Dx


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